Looks good, William! 

One correction that I saw - it's 'hand-in-hand' not 'Hand & Hand.'

William Piotrowski The profile looks fine.

BUT, you need to fix the website link. Not only does it default to the location of the user (in my case it shows me lenders in AZ), when I put Naperville, IL your name did not come up.

You need to direct it to your website:

https://williampiotrowski.diamondresidential.com/

Good job William.

Yes, I like it. 

It looks good, William.  However, I would not use that best advice quote.  You don't want people thinking you don't know what you're doing either.  Just my humble opinion. 

I took  a 'quick peek' -
Your new profile pic is great - you look approachable and professional.  Perhaps you may wish to update your testimonials...the last one entered was July 2015.

 It looks good to me. 

Looks good, I have nothing to add beyond what others said

Looks good to me.

If written well length is not much of a problem

 Looks good to me. Wish you the best.

looks good to me..... 

The test will be the results in the next few months. Good luck!

Your prospect calls will give you the best answer.

Perfect

You are right in-between just right and too much.

William

I like your picture, and the info is just right, and I agree with Carol Williams quite humbly also...A

:)

Just right.

Looking good. 

 Just about right. Picked up our only wedding rings from Sears at Oakbrook Shopping. Too small for both of us today.  

Looks fine to me.

Good luck 

William, what is your expectation regarding what this profile on ActiveRain will do?

Get you more buyer? How about home owners who want to sell? Or maybe it simply to help us AR'ers know who you are? Or, is this to be a 3rd point of validation for the consumer?

Without knowing the intent, an evaluation would be meaningless.....however.....you knew that was coming didn't you?

I would prefer the opening paragraph be in your voice or signed by the one whose words they are.

For example: William is always concerned about protecting his clients is much less meaningful than "My prime objective it to keep my buyers and seller out of harms way, even it if means falling on the sword."

I don't know... how about a link to it so it's easy to see?

Never too much....

 I think it's fine except the link you inserted does not work

All profiles are a work in progress add to delete from and tweak as you see room to improve

Looks good to me.

I just look at it and it is okay

Like the new pic!